Monday, November 21, 2011

Booming off the Pontoon

As I put one foot into the water,I nearly changed my mind to go and summing to the pontoon.On the way to the pontoon my body was shivering the whole way to the pontoon, then when I got to the pontoon it was time to jump off the pontoon I was so exited to jump off.


  1. Hi Donyae,

    You try very hard to write but I think that you need to concentrate more on your writing. You need to fix up your spelling.


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